If I may have the honor

一位讀者寫給我的信：

Hi, Justin
I am preparing to study abroad , would you like to share your experience with me. If I have the pleasure.
Best wishes

最後一句是不是覺得有點怪怪的？
應該寫成：
Would you like to share your experience with me if I may have the pleasure.

差了一個字，語感差很多喔！
另外，pleasure 改成 honor 也可以。